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I didn't make very many changes in these, just a few little things.

Tower1: fixed the "east-west" typo, fixed Dolanna's last name (I changed it after I started the series and didn't catch these), spellchecked, added a few extra lines of dialogue to explain some things, added more detail to the opening scene with Tarrin in the forest.

Tower2: spellchecked, no changes (I don't think any were needed here).

Tower3: spellchecked, but to be honest, I didn't read this one all the way through...if anyone finds anything, lemme know.

Missed this in Tower 1:

"She was a very regal-seeming woman, and moved with a commanding aire that all but announced to everyone that he was high born." (he->she)

Thanks for these edits. Maybe some of us can relive the series together now.

and this is why the author often doesn't do his own editing. That slipped by the spellchecker and I didn't catch it, as I did the spellcheck after I finished the edit, so as to spellcheck my changes.

I'll fix that, but I'm not gonna re-release a chapter for 1 small typo.

Yup, those will never caught on by spellchecker. i wish I had one of those gestalt AIs that can then do all my editing. Hah... but first I must have the ambition to write.

I can dream.

In tower 2 you call Anrak Alrak.

“What’s your Ungardt grandfather’s name? I remember the last time he came to the village to see your mother, but nobody would even talk to him.”
“His name is Alrak. He’s very nice. He gave me a sword last time he was here, and gave mother anew axe.

edit: Hmm, just notice anew should be a new. :p

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