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D'ni botsahv prehniv
The ending has not yet been written
The ending has not yet been written
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THANK YOU FOR THE PEACE OFFERING FEL.
I HAVE TO JOIN MOMMY DOOM HERE AND GET ON THE DONT FAIL A CLASS OR SACRIFE YOUR LIFE FOR US SOAP BOX. ESPECIALLY IF CLASSES ARE MORE DIFFICULT THAN THEY WERE BEFORE. BESIDES NOT HAVING HAD A REGULAR READING OFFERING I AM NOW ADDICTED (SEMI) TO FREELANCER.
WE ALL HAVE OUR BURDENS TO BEAR AND PRIORITIES TO LIVE WITH.
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P.S. SINCE THEY ARE HERE, HAPPY HOLIDAYS ALL!
I HAVE TO JOIN MOMMY DOOM HERE AND GET ON THE DONT FAIL A CLASS OR SACRIFE YOUR LIFE FOR US SOAP BOX. ESPECIALLY IF CLASSES ARE MORE DIFFICULT THAN THEY WERE BEFORE. BESIDES NOT HAVING HAD A REGULAR READING OFFERING I AM NOW ADDICTED (SEMI) TO FREELANCER.
WE ALL HAVE OUR BURDENS TO BEAR AND PRIORITIES TO LIVE WITH.
JOHN
P.S. SINCE THEY ARE HERE, HAPPY HOLIDAYS ALL!
IF ITS IN ALL CAPS "DEAL WITH IT!"
Have a good day or night or something.
Purrs and Growlls to you all !!!!!
John
Have a good day or night or something.
Purrs and Growlls to you all !!!!!
John
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I hate to be a pain Canis D but that link won`t work.
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D'ni botsahv prehniv
The ending has not yet been written
The ending has not yet been written
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I didn't try CanisD's links but I just put a couple versions up:
http://homepages.paradise.net.nz/greymi ... sword6.rtf
http://homepages.paradise.net.nz/greymi ... sword6.doc
http://homepages.paradise.net.nz/greymi ... sword6.rtf
http://homepages.paradise.net.nz/greymi ... sword6.doc
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Jeez this story is so great...I love it..Im going to have to stay off of here for a while, because i have read the whole thing so far,,and its killing me to wait and read chapter by chapter...You are a great writer..I wish I had the skill you do..
Thanks for the great story...
Thanks for the great story...
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Great chapter, I'll say. Very good.
But i saw that you had written Suld, instead of Pyro, when the demon were talking.
But i saw that you had written Suld, instead of Pyro, when the demon were talking.
"I'm a male. Males are supposed to act tough."
Tarrin, Chapter 29, The Questing Game.
Tarrin, Chapter 29, The Questing Game.
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canisd wrote: Don't know why it didn't work
'cause you cant link direct to hosted files iirc. Geocities blocks files linked to by non-geocities sites (from memory)
That's why you can't put avatar or any picture on there, then include the picture in your profile here...
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What a [glow=red,2,300]marvelous [/glow] chapter. You see, unlike the boys, I don't miss the blood and guts every now and then. I am much more inclined to appreciate a good bit of plot and character development... such as the tidbits about Mist you gave us in this chapter. I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit more than the last one.. Yeah!
Now, *waggling her Spoon at a shamefaced Fel* get back to your studying, young man! And stop apologizing to us for chapters that take longer than predicted. Yes, we're all addicts but the shakes go away after awhile. ;D
MD
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Death generates death as the vulture breeds the vulture.
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- From the movie, "Ben Hur"
Death generates death as the vulture breeds the vulture.
But the voice I heard today said, "Love your neighbor. Do good to those who despitefully use you".
- From the movie, "Ben Hur"
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I'm SO glad I checked this before I had to leave for class. *grins* Wow, this chapter was just great. I agree with MommyDoom in that it's nice to see the plot developed; that's one of the things I like a lot about your works. You have a great balance between the action and the plot/background.
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Hm,
Matrix Revolutions and a new Pyrosian Chronicles chapter?
Can this day get any better?
Matrix Revolutions and a new Pyrosian Chronicles chapter?
Can this day get any better?
Scientists dream it up.
Engineers make it work.
Engineers make it work.
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Another great chapter Fel. Keep up the good work, and the school work.
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Question for ya. Since they can now use Sorcery, since it's being drawn directly from Sennadar through Tarrin's sword, doesn't that mean that it's otherworldly, and as such can hurt demons in Pyrosia? Veddy Veddy interesting. ;D
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