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				Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:04 am
				by Fel
				Here it is.
If anyone finds any problems with the chapter, lemme know.  It was saved half on the old laptop and half on the new one.  If there were any issues with it being saved across two different Word versions, I need to know.
Sorry it took so long.
Enjoy.
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:17 am
				by kal
				nice! thanks a ton!
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:58 am
				by bherrm
				Thanks!
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 3:29 am
				by spinner707
				Awesome. Can’t wait to read, Fel. Thanks as always!!!
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 3:43 am
				by kyli
				Thanks!!!
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 3:56 am
				by OldGrumpInTraining
				Thank you  Good Sir, for this chapter and all the previous chapters in your tales.
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 4:19 am
				by calista241
				Awesome!  TY Fel!
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 4:42 am
				by Taliesin
				Awesome! 
Thank you Fel
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 6:36 am
				by Wolfee
				Thx Fel!!
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 11:44 am
				by Mladen
				Thank you very much Fel.
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 1:54 pm
				by expedient
				Thank Fel  

 
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:35 pm
				by Fel
				And yeah, already found an editing error.  I thought I deleted those two paragraphs, it must not have taken or something.
It's nothing major, you guys just get to see that I changed Estrella's dance scene from something passive to something active.
I'll chalk that up to moving to the new laptop.  I didn't read the chapter to proofread it this time, I was too busy tinkering with Word.
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:59 pm
				by felfan3000
				Oh joy! Christmas  came early!
Thanks Fel!
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 5:18 pm
				by Blacktiger
				felfan3000 wrote: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:59 pm
Oh joy! Christmas  came early!
Thanks Fel!
 
Indeed, it has ! Thank you Fel for being such an awesome storyteller all these many years now. I wish you and everybody else on this board a very mery xmas and a happy new year
 
			 
			
					
				Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
				Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 7:34 pm
				by scooter012
				Thanks Fel!!