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Subjugation chapter 6.

I've been writing more than studying.  I'll stop studying and go write to give myself a break, then I look up and realize 3 hours have gone by.

Not good for me.  If you're waiting for new chapters, probably good for you.

Anyway, back to studying.  Enjoy.

Three Cheers for Fel!

Subjugation rocks

http://spec8472.thepsyco.com/sennadar/files/sub6.doc

There ya go folks.

Edit Very very nice chapter. Thanks!

Up on mine as well. Thanks for the new reading material Fel. Now go study, we can't have you failing any classes. You failing means you have to do it all over again and leaves you with less time to write.
Anyways, thanks again.


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Great chapter man.  Good luck to Tim, he's gonna need it.  I wonder if Jyslin will end up running with her boy.

Fel, you just made my day.

The next...15 minutes or so are going to be the best part of today, and then the next 30 or so are going to be the best part of tomorrow.

Hrm.  Reading over the chapter, I seem to have messed up somewhere, but it's not a major, massive change.

Eleri's nickname is supposed to be Kumi.  For some weird reason, it's showing up as Kuri in chapter 6.

I must have had a blond moment with the Find and Replace feature or something, and accidentally replaced all the isntances with this incorrect name.  lol, it's not like it hasn't happened before.  I once did the same thing in the Pyrosian chronicles with Zyrilin's name, but that time I caught it and fixed it before releasing the chapter.  That time it was because I found 2 instances where I'd misspelled the name the same way, then just used Find and Replace to correct them...and kinda replaced all the GOOD spellings with the BAD one.  ;)

I'll fix it, but it's nothing so huge it demands a re-release of the chapter.

Just a FYI, people.  ;)

Excellent. Like I've said before, I favor Subjugation over Tarrin's stories. Especially since this is gettin very interesting right now. I really hope you're going to write soon the next one, and the one after that, and the one after that, and the... you get the idea.

I hate cliffhangers, and this is a bit of a cliffhanger since Jason's only getting settled. The action hasn't started yet... I also wonder why the people haven't yet tried to make a deal with Jason so that they could live in his area safe from the gangs. He'd be a one mean protector.

Fel, I'd like you to get on the IRC channel sometime soon. I have something i want to discuss about the next chapter, away from prying eyes better off suprised.

And great work. I hope you get out at least one more chapter of Sub before you get back to Pyrosia. Leaving us like that... Evil...  ;) ;D

Rereading sub 6, did anyone else think of Rogue from X-men when they saw how Temika acted to being touched?

Tell me if I'm wrong, but in 4 and 5, didn't the railgun have a built it matter creator? (as in it made it's own ammo?) and in 6 all of a sudden he had "clips" for it.

lochar wrote:Rereading sub 6, did anyone else think of Rogue from X-men when they saw how Temika acted to being touched?

I thought of Jason, actually... like not wanting physical contact (albeit, only with Faey) because it'd allow complete access to his mind...