Thor's Child - complete to Chapter 21

[GBLW]

Here you go folks, but I have a comment.

I do write to please myself, but like all writers, I have an ego and I like to get feedback. If you enjoy what I'm writing, please let me know, if you don't, then tell me why, if you see a mistake, let me know that too, because even my editor isn't perfect and she admits it.

I also accept ordinary comment, critiques or even criticism. Of course I'm also a crotchety old guy who might reply to your criticism quite vocally, after all like I said, I do have an ego.

One thing you can be guaranteed, I do read all comments and often respond to any that I find interesting or amusing.

K Pelle

Oh, and a big thanks to those who do comment in any way. (kp)

[konman]

Thanks a lot.

Keep up the great work.

[giddiani]

This is awesome! I didn't want to do any work this afternoon anyway!

Thanks a ton GBLW.

[gesit]

Really love the way you write m8,
great stuff, trouble is i'll always be wanting more, so please.....??
thanks

ham

[A-Space]

Thanks!

[ThisAndThat1]

Happy Days - a new chapter

Thanks

[crxbnt]

Thanks KP!

I have been reading your stories since before I heard of the WWW! First found a story on the old message board days, under a completely different pseudonym. I have been following you from site to site, and was pleased to discover that you were posting comments here one day. And was excited when you started sharing stories again.

Thanks!

crxbnt

[dragonmage]

thanks for the story I like it alot

[Namizujs]

Thank You! Just managed to register.
Thanks for all the work.
Are you the sam KP as was at Gina Marie Wyle's?

John

[GBLW]

Thanks for the replies folks, and yes, I am the same writer who once posted on BtFH.
(Unfortunately the political climate there didn't really agree with me. )

KP

[zedd]

Thank you for the new chapter. This is a very good story, and it is always great when you or Fel post something for us to read.

regards

[DigitalMaestro]

Oh, I'm amused. Thanks for the post! Keep 'em comin

-DM

[Greymist]

Thought I should throw in a thanks too. Thanks for writing GBLW, you still have me hooked to keep reading (even if Thor does bug me with his rants still )

[postal]

Aw hell, let Thor have his "rant"! After all, he is still a kid, even though he has been put into some pretty tough situations. Could you have gone through what he has and still be "Mr Calm, Cool, & Collected"???????????

Great story line and great writing describing it!

Thanks,
TJ