The Aurora Project, Ch. 2 **SPOILERS!**
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The Aurora Project, Ch. 2 **SPOILERS!**
Yay for more chapters.
Re: The Aurora Project, Ch. 2 **SPOILERS!**
Don't suppose I can bug you to change these lines could I?
"and the few things he’d managed to accumulate over the last six years were few" - the double few.
"and as Jonathan got closer to it he realized that it wasn’t just painted black, it was absorbing all the light around it as well" - Shouldn't that be Ethan?
"and the few things he’d managed to accumulate over the last six years were few" - the double few.
"and as Jonathan got closer to it he realized that it wasn’t just painted black, it was absorbing all the light around it as well" - Shouldn't that be Ethan?
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Re: The Aurora Project, Ch. 2 **SPOILERS!**
Oops... can you tell that I proofed this while I was sleepy?Greymist wrote:Don't suppose I can bug you to change these lines could I?
"and the few things he’d managed to accumulate over the last six years were few" - the double few.
"and as Jonathan got closer to it he realized that it wasn’t just painted black, it was absorbing all the light around it as well" - Shouldn't that be Ethan?