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				Thor's Child - prologue
				Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 11:59 am
				by GBLW
				Well, here is the prologue of 'Thor's Child' 
GBLW
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 1:28 pm
				by Spec8472
				Added you to the group, and moved the story. 
...and now I must fly.
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:33 pm
				by gesit
				thanks m8
ham
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 5:01 pm
				by crxbnt
				Thanks! I will read it on the trip home tonight.
crxbnt
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 6:02 pm
				by furry_wolf2001b
				Nice start! 

Hmm, now i have to go read alpha project again, as i can not remember what it was from the name. 

 
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 6:38 pm
				by Delvfar
				What is Alpha Project? Where can i get it? Thanks for writing  Now i just need it!  to read it! 

 
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 8:06 pm
				by GBLW
				Spec8472 wrote:Added you to the group, and moved the story. 
...and now I must fly.
Thank You - to be honest I thought I'd done something wrong and was going to e-mail you later.
I would have done it then, but I had to rush off for early morning medical tests myself.
Anyway, thanks again
GBLW
 
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 8:18 pm
				by GBLW
				Delvfar wrote:What is Alpha Project? Where can i get it? Thanks for writing  Now i just need it!  to read it! 

 
Alpha Project is one of Fel's unfinished stories and can be found here: 
http://sennadar.com/oldsite/other/other.html#alpha 
I just liked the premise of a 'rebel' ESP talent running free and being chased by the 'US marines' and their allies. 
(Shades of the 'wild west' etc?  

 )
GBLW
PS: there was only one chapter, to Alpha Project, not two as you might think from viewing the site I sent you to.
PPS: Since I was referring to Fel's story so much, and since I absolutely hate Microsoft's .doc format, I ran 'Alpha Project' through my .html conversion program.  I thought others might like to read it that way as well, so I'll upload it here.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 2:41 pm
				by Delvfar
				Thanks!  I will read it today! 

 
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 10:12 pm
				by Sancria
				Neat!
Nice start.  I wish I had that ability, make my life as a med student so much easier.
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:38 pm
				by GBLW
				Sancria wrote:Neat!
Nice start.  I wish I had that ability, make my life as a med student so much easier.
I have to ask, where are you studying medicine? The reason I'm asking is that I worked at UVic for over twenty years and live locally.
GBLW
 
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:47 pm
				by bjjohns
				Well, I am looking forward to this story. I did enjoy Alpha Project, and was always hoping it would be revisited someday. Thanks B.
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:06 pm
				by Fel
				bjjohns wrote:Well, I am looking forward to this story. I did enjoy Alpha Project, and was always hoping it would be revisited someday. Thanks B.
I'm honestly not sure if I'll ever pick it up again.  It's not that I didn't think it had potential, it's that the story was, and still is, rather hard to plan out which would make the story take longer than usual for me to write, and I always seem to have another project higher up in the queue...and the fact that I was highly unimaginative and I simply reassigned the names "Kit" and "Jessica" to another story, whose name shall not be mentioned here in this thread.
Who knows, I just may decide to knock out a couple of chapters of it someday when I'm bored and looking for something "new" to do, at least after I finish the Draconian Measures short story.  That's still on the board, and it's more important than this one because I only see it going maybe 1 really long chapter or 2 standard chapters before it finishes.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 1:54 pm
				by Mad Monk
				Well done!  
 
The more stories based on Fel's work, the better.  

 
			 
			
					
				Re: Thor's Child - a 'spinoff' of Alpha Project
				Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:51 pm
				by GBLW
				Fel wrote:I'm honestly not sure if I'll ever pick it up again.  It's not that I didn't think it had potential, it's that the story was, and still is, rather hard to plan out which would make the story take longer than usual for me to write, and I always seem to have another project higher up in the queue...and the fact that I was highly unimaginative and I simply reassigned the names "Kit" and "Jessica" to another story, whose name shall not be mentioned here in this thread.
Who knows, I just may decide to knock out a couple of chapters of it someday when I'm bored and looking for something "new" to do, at least after I finish the Draconian Measures short story.  That's still on the board, and it's more important than this one because I only see it going maybe 1 really long chapter or 2 standard chapters before it finishes.
Well, I don't plan to step on your toes, in other words I'm  planning to write a story that parallels yours with only minor mention of Alpha Base and the warren, although I'd like to mention 'General John' in passing if I may - nothing specific, just a minor reference.
GBLW