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Ok. Why do I get the dread feeling in the pit of my stomach about Allison and the DVD notes being recorded??!?!?

Anyone else feel this has potential problems written all over it?

J-Man5

Well I believe something will happen in the next chapter. it is just the way Fel writes and the other shoe is going to fall.

I just hope it will not be a sob story like someone close died etc. etc.

yeah,could well be.Guess we will have to wait to see.

Awesome ending - I agree that it would be nice to see more of her.

Well done with the flight stuff too - the G1000 system is awesome, especially when all the bells and whistles are added in... having XM-WX and all that can really spoil someone. In a future chapter can you throw something in about how Kit goes to fly someone else's plane and it's got steam gauges and he has to take a few minutes just to remember everything?

-M

J-Man5 wrote:Ok. Why do I get the dread feeling in the pit of my stomach about Allison and the DVD notes being recorded??!?!?

Anyone else feel this has potential problems written all over it?

J-Man5

Equally possible is something happening to Allison.

I would also not be surprised if the article offends some anti-smut campeigner who decides it is trying to lure students into prostitution. That could lead to a "family values" group picketting the magazine, and pressure from some advertisers. The end result? Kit feels terrible, and Rick points out that the controversey has doubled sales.

I can't see any real trouble coming from somebody else getting their hands on the notes. Since the article was going to be anonymous I don't think the notes would contain any revealing information about Allison's true identity. So the only trouble from losing the notes would be that Kit is breaking Allison's trust. But I agree, the ending of Chapter 21 did sound a bit ominous.

miraborn wrote:Awesome ending - I agree that it would be nice to see more of her.

Well done with the flight stuff too - the G1000 system is awesome, especially when all the bells and whistles are added in... having XM-WX and all that can really spoil someone. In a future chapter can you throw something in about how Kit goes to fly someone else's plane and it's got steam gauges and he has to take a few minutes just to remember everything?

-M

By the way, i was bored and did a quick search about that plane , and by golly it looks awesome.I have no idea about flying and nevertheless thought it was pretty kool.