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				OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 8:05 pm
				by Fel
				Yup, I'm done.  I was gonna put some extra stuff in it, but I decided to simply end it with the battle....since I was being Fel and ended 14 with a cliffhanger.
I'm so bad.
I got on IRC and sent it to Greymist, Spec8472, uni, Graewolfe, and Smilodon.  One of them can throw up a link in a little bit, cause I can't get into my shell to put up a temporary link.
Enjoy guys.  I hope you like it.
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 8:17 pm
				by canisd
				
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 9:48 pm
				by Rb777
				Great chapter Fel. I can't wait for the next one
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 10:24 pm
				by Knight314
				agree with the above... good battle scene. ;D
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 10:37 pm
				by Dash
				cool chapter  ;D
and no cliff hangar either. What are we going to talk about for a month  :P
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 12:32 am
				by Hearly
				Very sweet chapter, can't wait for 16 now
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 12:50 am
				by The_Namer
				;DWhat they said.
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 2:46 am
				by Lochar
				Up on my site, and DAMN IT FEL.  You just had to do it didn't you?  I was just finishing with my withdrawl, and here you go feeding my addiction again.  Jeez, hopefullly you don't hold it back from us forever.  *grin*
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 8:30 am
				by Peter_Koopman
				It's a shame, I don't have time to read it now. No time! Can not read!!! MUST READ NOW!!! Arrgggg!!!!!
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 3:29 pm
				by Wildcat
				That's less of an immediate cliffhanger, but I'm still stuck wanting very badly to know what happens next ..... Great chapter!
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 3:41 pm
				by Forbidder
				This is great stuff!  The mind nectar of the gods!
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 7:02 pm
				by runninbear
				Thank you! Thank you! Fantastiic another  chapter  to read. ;D
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 11:45 pm
				by NightShadow
				Wow. You certainly know how to make a good battle, Fel.
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 12:12 am
				by Harod
				this is one of your best battles ever and i thought you had forgotten us. the ability for tarrin to hold his temper was an unexpected turn of events. i expect the demon lord to be quite upset as well as the one. Thanks agin for another great chapter. ;D
			 
			
					
				Re: OH MYGOD, IT DIDN'T TAKE FOREVER!  (Chapter 1
				Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 5:38 pm
				by Taltos
				thanks for the spoiler...>:(>:(
is this forum software able to include a spoiler tag or something
i.e. if wou write 
 and the engine turns it into black letters in black background so that you have to select the text to read it?
only an idea which is operative on another forum i use to be on...
taltos