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This is your word of warning.

The "cute and fuzzy" aspect of this story ends with this chapter. From here, it will get graphic.

Graphic in all areas. The cursing will be graphic (ala Subjugation), the violence will be graphic (ala Firestaff), everything will be graphic. And yes, that means everything. If there is any depiction of sex, it will be graphic. Not gratuitous or described in second by second detail, but I won't "cutscene" away as I usually do (I'd suck at erotic writing, but any sex you see in this story will be by no means erotic.). You'll be privy to everything, and the consequences it entails.

You Have Been Warned.

Wooo Hoooo! Thanks for the present Fel!

Cool, can't wait.

Thanks Fel!

Thanks, sounds like best of the best album.

Wow thanks for another chapter... I thought you said you'd be busy for a weeks? Not that I'm complaining mind you.

Cheers, looks fun.

Thanks Fel. Just finished the chapter. Amazing! Can't wait for the next one!

Digital Maestro

Awesome. Thanks Fel!

Fel wrote:This is your word of warning.

The "cute and fuzzy" aspect of this story ends with this chapter. From here, it will get graphic.

Graphic in all areas. The cursing will be graphic (ala Subjugation), the violence will be graphic (ala Firestaff), everything will be graphic. And yes, that means everything. If there is any depiction of sex, it will be graphic. Not gratuitous or described in second by second detail, but I won't "cutscene" away as I usually do (I'd suck at erotic writing, but any sex you see in this story will be by no means erotic.). You'll be privy to everything, and the consequences it entails.

You Have Been Warned.

thanks fel!

with the above aforementioned introduction,I can hardly wait!

You know this reminds me of the time when I faced the state champion pace bowler in high school...

I thought I could hit hime for six to rattle him... I did... Several times as a matter of fact

But he also hit my helmet 6 times during the innings... Ouch

Getting hit on the head by a head hunter coming to you at 130+ km/h is not something I would like to repeat especially when my teamates warned me to play it safe against that guy. At least he didn't get me on the chest

Your Warning Is Duly Noted


Mysterious

great m8, just great
thanks

ham

Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. I think I will hold off my comments on the speed of posting lest I jinx it.

Cougar2k2 wrote:Wow thanks for another chapter... I thought you said you'd be busy for a weeks? Not that I'm complaining mind you.

I will be starting this weekend. I have a 5 page essay, a 3 page essay, a major test, and a presentation all coming due in the next 2 weeks.

I'll still work on chapter 3, but I will have other things on the plate that will slow me down.

Fel wrote:
I will be starting this weekend. I have a 5 page essay, a 3 page essay, a major test, and a presentation all coming due in the next 2 weeks.

I'll still work on chapter 3, but I will have other things on the plate that will slow me down.

Crap man, good luck on all that. I have a few papers due in a week and I sometimes tend to loose track of time when I'm on a roll and pay for it bigtime in the morning. Be careful if you're like that.

As for the new chapter, I definatly like it it gives the emerging plot more direction. As to what adventures await our young hero I can only guess. Good job Master Fel.