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And I drag out the story by yet another chapter filled with inane dialogue instead of plot movement!

At this rate, it'll end around chapter 39.

That, or just kill everyone in a tragic plane crash en route to Boston after the wedding.

....

Dammit, I just gave away the plot!

Where is that damn edit button?

Thanks Fel,

Can't wait to get home to read it.

Whoot thanks fel.

Thanks, Fel! Airplane reading tomorrow!

WOOT!! The new chapter is out early! Thanks, Fel!

39 chapters? I've just died and gone to heaven.

Nicolai

Great Chapter Fel! I gotta say the part with the nuclear submarine was just... WOW! I never saw it coming.

thanks, and that does clear up quite a few things that were bothering me.

Thank You!

thanks buuuuuuddy ooowwwwuuuuu uuhh squezze tha juuice

can't wait to have all the 39 chapter m8
great, thanks

ham

Another great one Fel, as if you produced anything else?

Fel wrote:And I drag out the story by yet another chapter filled with inane dialogue instead of plot movement!

At this rate, it'll end around chapter 39.

As for the inane dialogue, I don't think anyone will complain about it. Sometimes those are the best parts, at least I think it can be. Makes the characters feel more real, because life isn't just all the important parts its the little things. So whats up for the next chapter a play by play on Kit and Jessie's sleepless and nerve filled night before the wedding? Anyway I'm looking forward to it.

"Inane dialogue"?!?!?!?!? Where? Seemed pretty god to me.

Hey, This story still has lots of life. I am sure you can make chapter 139!

Thanks again FEL.

crxbnt

crxbnt wrote:"Inane dialogue"?!?!?!?!? Where? Seemed pretty god to me. Loved to see...

Dude, spoilers are not good. Especially, say, if an admin has been away and completely missed two chapters!