Wrong days
Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 3:06 pm
Somebody has probably already pointed this out but I can't find it so ....
The day that this all starts out on in chapt 1 is incorrect in several ways. First, the Wednesday near the middle of May 2007 was the 16th not the 14th. Second, the days don't work out for everything to happen consistently.
For Symone to be defeated on Saturday to be Jason's slave on Sunday the following works out (backwards):
Sa - Yana & Myri
Fr - Ilia & Sheleese
Th - Lyn & Bryn
W - Jyslin & Maya (escort)
Tu - Jyslin meets Jason
So, the whole story needs to start out on Tuesday, 15 May, 2007 for the days to fit.
This also creates a problem as Jason's judo classes are on Wed & Sat so he wouldn't be able to miss the class on the day he fights Jyslin OR chapter 3 needs to start on Tuesday, 22 May 2007, the judo classes would have to be Tue & Sat, and I'm pretty sure some internal references to day-after-tomorrow would have to change (about the Jyslin's date).
Hope this helps.
The day that this all starts out on in chapt 1 is incorrect in several ways. First, the Wednesday near the middle of May 2007 was the 16th not the 14th. Second, the days don't work out for everything to happen consistently.
For Symone to be defeated on Saturday to be Jason's slave on Sunday the following works out (backwards):
Sa - Yana & Myri
Fr - Ilia & Sheleese
Th - Lyn & Bryn
W - Jyslin & Maya (escort)
Tu - Jyslin meets Jason
So, the whole story needs to start out on Tuesday, 15 May, 2007 for the days to fit.
This also creates a problem as Jason's judo classes are on Wed & Sat so he wouldn't be able to miss the class on the day he fights Jyslin OR chapter 3 needs to start on Tuesday, 22 May 2007, the judo classes would have to be Tue & Sat, and I'm pretty sure some internal references to day-after-tomorrow would have to change (about the Jyslin's date).
Hope this helps.
