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Re: The Fovean Chronicles Online - Need opinions
Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 2:44 am
by Lochar
Fel wrote:clearly, I must get out the whip.
WRITE FASTER! FASTER, DARN YOU!
*crack!*
My, it feels...good, to do that to someone rather than have it done to me.
Score!
Doesn't it though?
Re: The Fovean Chronicles Online - Need opinions
Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 8:23 pm
by SHALIK_TEX
I have just recently found you story. I have just finished reading the first three chapters of book 1 and would like to read the rest before getting into book 2. If there is any way I could do this I would love to read it. So far I would like to say I enjoy your writing. You set a good introduction and have kept the flow going in a good direction. Well thats just my two cents...
Re: The Fovean Chronicles Online - Need opinions
Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 11:16 pm
by Fovean_Author
SHALIK_TEX wrote:I have just recently found you story. I have just finished reading the first three chapters of book 1 and would like to read the rest before getting into book 2. If there is any way I could do this I would love to read it. So far I would like to say I enjoy your writing. You set a good introduction and have kept the flow going in a good direction. Well thats just my two cents...
You can read it right on the site - look at the bottom of the page and you can see a link either to Lulu.com or PayPal, where it will run you like $3.00
Re: The Fovean Chronicles Online - Need opinions
Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 3:52 am
by Fovean_Author
OK - updates are done up to chapter 42. If you've been following the story, I'd REALLY like some opinions on the new direction over the old from Chap 39 on.
Re: The Fovean Chronicles Online - Need opinions
Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:00 am
by Fovean_Author
What do you guys think of the new site?
http://www.intwiz.com
Book Two: Finished - now, let's see some comments
Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 6:49 am
by Fovean_Author
OK, guys - book two, Indomitus Oriens, is DONE.
Well, the rough is. As well you know, there's still the pass back and then the rewrite, then enough editing to choke a walrus.
But the words are all there, and you can see how it ends.
As long as I get comments, it will stay up. If not, well - I appreciate that a lot of you have put a lot of effort into reading me, and there WILL be autographed copies.
Let me know what you think, please!
Re: The Fovean Chronicles Online - Need opinions
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 6:43 am
by Mysterious
A Shakespearean ending...
You left a lot of dead bodies with protagonists finding Enlightenment at the end. You also left a lot of loose ends for you to easily enter into with the third book so that is good as well. Overall this has been a pretty entertaining read
Keep up the Good Work
Mysterious
Re: The Fovean Chronicles Online - Need opinions
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:46 pm
by Fovean_Author
Thanks - you've really spent some time reading me and I appreciate it
There's two things I'm worried about right now - does the beginning drag, and have I left enough room at the end for a proper conclusion?
I don't want to write a spoiler, but at the end you can see why they had to die. I'm wondering if I shouldn't shorten up the Battle of the Vice and spread the deaths out more