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Posted: **Tue Nov 21, 2006 4:03 pm**

Great, fantastic chapter. Amazing work Fel, congratulation.

Posted: **Tue Nov 21, 2006 8:14 pm**

OMFG, you are now my hero. And I don't mean Ontario Mega Finance Group I mean you Fel, you are my hero. Originaly I was thinking of sending one or 2 cards but I don't think it is going to stop there. To day started out as a crappy day, found out i failed my midterm but this wipes all of that away. Okay enough of this must go read it is done downloading...........

Posted: **Tue Nov 21, 2006 11:36 pm**

thank you.

my gratatude is beyond words, and I have yet to learn a language adequte to express it.

Posted: **Wed Nov 22, 2006 12:06 am**

GREAT chapter Fel, f MARBLES!

Please keep up the great work.

Posted: **Wed Nov 22, 2006 12:57 am**

Marbles now that was very very funny. If the chair didn't have support for the back I would fall on my ass...

It took me some time to stopp laughing. Now there is just one thing wrong and that is the waiting for the next chapter.

I'm humble by your skill as a writer.

Love to read more...

Till next time

Posted: **Wed Nov 22, 2006 2:07 am**

That kicked _ass_!

Posted: **Wed Nov 22, 2006 3:38 am**

On site

Posted: **Wed Nov 22, 2006 6:25 am**

YES!!! Thats what I'm talking about!!! Wonderful work fel, as usual.

Posted: **Wed Nov 22, 2006 9:46 am**

Jeebus that was good, I'm still smiling. And folks you think Jason is awesome, I introduce you to James Galloway!

Dude...just...yeah I can't describe it. Well I CAN but I don't think it would be appropriate for public consumption

Posted: **Wed Nov 22, 2006 10:05 am**

Awesome. The story rocks to the moon.

Marbles ... oh my god... I am laughing all the way

Trillane is pissed cause the warfare is more like vandalism on a big scale.

I cannot just wait for the next... I did wonder whether the Myleena is going to be his sister.... the hints are there.... If I pick up the hint correctly.

Posted: **Wed Nov 22, 2006 10:07 am**

Well somehow Myleena may be not caos Kiaari should know unless that knowledge is unavailable to the Kimdori.... hmm.... well I am just getting ahead of the thinking game. The story rocks as far as it is to me.. A very great chapter.

Posted: **Wed Nov 22, 2006 4:20 pm**

Fel, that chapter was amazing. Thank you.

Mizriath wrote:Trillane is pissed cause the warfare is more like vandalism on a big scale.

I half expected him to build a robot that spray painted "Trillane Suz0rz" everywhere...

Posted: **Wed Nov 22, 2006 4:48 pm**

Sbudda wrote:Fel, that chapter was amazing. Thank you.
Mizriath wrote:Trillane is pissed cause the warfare is more like vandalism on a big scale.
I half expected him to build a robot that spray painted "Trillane Suz0rz" everywhere...

That could be next... heh

Posted: **Wed Nov 22, 2006 5:14 pm**

Extremely enjoyable chapter, cry havoc and let loose the mables of war!

Tex

Posted: **Wed Nov 22, 2006 8:20 pm**

ohmigod....i totally enjoyed that chapter! satan's marbles, my ass... more of this! and quick!

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