Unification, chapter 7.
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Re: Unification, chapter 7.
Thanks Fel. Get Well!!
Re: Unification, chapter 7.
Thanks, Fel. Another great chapter.
I hope you don't have the crud I'm fighting. It's miserable.
Nicolai
I hope you don't have the crud I'm fighting. It's miserable.
Nicolai
An objective definition of "Political Correctness":
"A doctrine fostered by a delusional, illogical, liberal minority, and
rabidly promoted by an unscrupulous mainstream media, which holds forth the
proposition that it is entirely possible to pick up a turd by the clean end."
"A doctrine fostered by a delusional, illogical, liberal minority, and
rabidly promoted by an unscrupulous mainstream media, which holds forth the
proposition that it is entirely possible to pick up a turd by the clean end."
Re: Unification, chapter 7.
Well thanks for getting the chapter out to us even though you're sick. Much appreciated. Get well soon and thanks once again.
"I can control my destiny, but not my fate. Destiny means there are opportunities to turn right or left, but fate is a one-way street. I believe we all have the choice as to whether we fulfil our destiny, but our fate is sealed."
--Paulo Coelho
--Paulo Coelho
Re: Unification, chapter 7.
Thanks again for the chapter Fel, sorry you are not well.
Hope you recover soon.
Hope you recover soon.
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Re: Unification, chapter 7.
hehehehe We've Known you were Sick for years now .....Fel wrote:This chapter is not spellchecked, because I'm dead tired and I'm also sick to boot.
Enjoy.

What? (just a sec..) Ok the Voices tell me i'm taking that the wrong way

you mean physicaly sick


Oh we're off to read the Wizzard.......

Phantom
And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
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Re: Unification, chapter 7.
Thank you for a wonderful chapter!! Get better soon 

Re: Unification, chapter 7.
Hope you get well soon Fel!!
P.S. The "Voices" tell me that Phantom's a freak of nature
J/K!!!
P.S. The "Voices" tell me that Phantom's a freak of nature

J/K!!!

Re: Unification, chapter 7.
Thanks for the update fel!
Just curious, but have you ever heard of the Yir Yoront people? I read this fascinating article in a sociology class about how the introduction of steel axe gifts completely dismantled the Yir Yoront culture. The article is available online Steel Axes for Stone – Age Australians by Lauriston Sharp and is a poignant example of unintended consequences. :b Your Gruug encounter made me think of this
Just curious, but have you ever heard of the Yir Yoront people? I read this fascinating article in a sociology class about how the introduction of steel axe gifts completely dismantled the Yir Yoront culture. The article is available online Steel Axes for Stone – Age Australians by Lauriston Sharp and is a poignant example of unintended consequences. :b Your Gruug encounter made me think of this
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Re: Unification, chapter 7.
The "Voices" look at Wolfy ....wolfy wrote:Hope you get well soon Fel!!
P.S. The "Voices" tell me that Phantom's a freak of nature![]()
J/K!!!

(Thinking) humm we haven't had wolf for dinner in quite a while.

Spreads out Tin-Foil all over the Floor and then
Starts cooking some fava beans and opens a nice chianti.
Phantom
And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
Re: Unification, chapter 7.
That issue of steel weapons being given to the natives does remind me of the movie "The Gods must be crazy"
Not that I think Fel is crazy.
so please don't punish me by delaying chapter 8, else I'm sure all the people here are going to roast me.

Not that I think Fel is crazy.
so please don't punish me by delaying chapter 8, else I'm sure all the people here are going to roast me.
Re: Unification, chapter 7.
Before Phantom can help himself to Wolfy's liver.... Wolfy reachers over and taps Phantom's head and hears a pleasent thump - just like a ripe watermellon.The "Voices" look at Wolfy ....
(Thinking) humm we haven't had wolf for dinner in quite a while.
Spreads out Tin-Foil all over the Floor and then
Starts cooking some fava beans and opens a nice chianti.
Phantom
The "Voices" wisper to Wolfy...."Ohh! Premium aged Braaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaains! Drool"
With his "can-opener" Wolfy opens Phantoms skull and puts Phantom's brain in a blender, adds hot peppers, tobasco powder and blends till smooth.
Holding a large patter of crackers surrounding a bowl of the recently blended brains, Wolfy glaces around, pleasently at the rest of Fel's audience.... Brain Dip anyone?
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Re: Unification, chapter 7.
wolfy wrote: Before Phantom can help himself to Wolfy's liver.... Wolfy reachers over and taps Phantom's head and hears a pleasent thump - just like a ripe watermellon.
The "Voices" wisper to Wolfy...."Ohh! Premium aged Braaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaains! Drool"
With his "can-opener" Wolfy opens Phantoms skull and puts Phantom's brain in a blender, adds hot peppers, tobasco powder and blends till smooth.
Holding a large patter of crackers surrounding a bowl of the recently blended brains, Wolfy glaces around, pleasently at the rest of Fel's audience.... Brain Dip anyone?
Phantom Taps Wolfy on the shoulder and ask's ....( Why you doing that to Fifer? )
Fades back out in to the darkness......Laughing
Phantom
And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
Re: Unification, chapter 7.
Wooot! 697th to download this chapter!wolfy wrote:Wooot! First!
On a more serious note, great job on the chapter Fel, I can really see the story shaping up.

As always, I'm looking forward to the next part, cliff hangers or not.
I'd gladly travel back in time, except I would have to wait longer for the next chapter of Fel's work...sorry, pass.