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Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 5:10 am
by Gabriel
Really a cliffhanger, now how long do I have to hang here for chapter 6??
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 9:53 am
by afrigeek
That cliff hanger is classic...
Due to my migration to the new macbook pro ( 4GB) I have only just seen chapters 4 and 5 but what a nice surprise.
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:36 am
by Sancria
wohoo!
Now THAT's how you end a chapter! I can't wait until the next part, that was an amazing chapter! It ended so perfectly _evil!_
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:41 am
by Sancria
Fel wrote:deane wrote:groan love your writing fel but man a cliff hanger wow and what a cliff hanger it is. good job but wow I don't think I've EVER seen a cliff hanger like this!
Before someone else says it, I must claim the utter masterpiece that was chapter 18 of The Sword of Fire.
My greatest achievement...*sniff.*
Where art thou, O perfection of my evil!
I disagree, this chapter was very well written and just had a certain flow that the Sword of Fire was just beginning to display. If anything, I think you've gotten better at being evil.
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 11:18 am
by firedrake3
And again we are punched in the face by another of your masterful cliffhangers. By the way great chapter.
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 11:37 am
by ThisAndThat1
Fel wrote:Here it is. Cliffhangers and all.
Wow, your not kidding cliffhanger.
Great job. Keep it up!
P.S. He was just poking fun at her - She did not need to take him seriously!
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 4:12 pm
by Greymist
btw, 3400/300 = 11.33, that can't be right?
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 4:23 pm
by UrsaMajor
Dang it Fel,
A cliff hanger of this size, you better have chapter 6 written and ready to post in a few hours, couse
you are going to make us nuts. Love it, but who would have thought of that story twist,
man that
sure takes the story in a different twisted line, and the hooks you are making into it, dang it.
Please post chapter 6 quickly
UrsaMajor
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 8:21 pm
by expedient
Brilliant Fel! Suddenly a dozen things are going on at once...
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 9:11 pm
by dellstart
thanks fel , awesome stuff!!
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 9:22 pm
by wolfy
Great job! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 2:51 pm
by miraborn
UrsaMajor wrote:Dang it Fel,
A cliff hanger of this size, you better have chapter 6 written and ready to post in a few hours, couse
you are going to make us nuts. Love it, but who would have thought of that story twist,
man that
sure takes the story in a different twisted line, and the hooks you are making into it, dang it.
Please post chapter 6 quickly
UrsaMajor
I had a feeling that twist was coming, it was just a matter of time and how it would manifest.
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 6:05 pm
by michaelsuave
Wow, nice chapter and cliff hanger... so how's chapter 6 coming along?
<-----Greedy for chapters*
~Michael
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 1:08 am
by Mansoor B. K.
U the best Fel
Re: Unification, chapter 5.
Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 12:19 am
by Gabriel
Heelllloooooo......... heeellllppppp..... my fingers are starting to cramp up, Fel how long more are you going to leave me hanging on this cliff???
When can I get these poor fingers on chapter 6??