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Re: Chapter 15.
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 4:54 am
by UrsaMajor
Thanks Fel, So Far loving it.
Re: Chapter 15.
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 4:32 pm
by Ledsmith
I just want to know...how long did it take to write:
“Does it make it hotter to know I know you were looking, or did you think it was hotter thinking you were peeking when I didn’t know you were there?”
so that it made some semblance of sense. It took me three times reading for me to understand.
Re: Chapter 15.
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 5:16 pm
by Fel
What, did I leave my participle dangling? Oh my. Excuse me.
*zip*
Re: Chapter 15.
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 5:33 pm
by Ledsmith
Fel wrote:What, did I leave my participle dangling? Oh my. Excuse me.
*zip*
Wow
that was alittle bit more of Fel then I ever wanted to see. I think I'm jealous, to be able to write a sentence that complicated with you participle dangling is impressive. And geez, what a participle it is too.
Re: Chapter 15.
Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 9:34 pm
by dellstart
thanks fel!
plots within plots within plots....
classic fair from our awesome wordsmith!
Re: Chapter 15.
Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 7:32 am
by Phantom
Fel wrote:What, did I leave my participle dangling? Oh my. Excuse me.
*zip*
He He He
Partical man,
Partical man,
Doin' the things a partical can.
What's he like, it's not important,
Partical man.
Is he dot, or is he a spec?
When he's under water does he get wet?
Or does the water get him instead?
Nobody knows, Partical man.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HPDTdtEUePU
Phantom