Great story!
I love it so far and it has a lot of potential. Eagerly waiting for chapter 3.
THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.
Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.
OK, post #2 on chapter #2.
KEEP IT UP!
This is a great start, Fel. Just keep it going and you have a hit on your hands.
Coming up (in the next thread) my comments on chapter 3
Nicolai
KEEP IT UP!

This is a great start, Fel. Just keep it going and you have a hit on your hands.
Coming up (in the next thread) my comments on chapter 3
Nicolai
An objective definition of "Political Correctness":
"A doctrine fostered by a delusional, illogical, liberal minority, and
rabidly promoted by an unscrupulous mainstream media, which holds forth the
proposition that it is entirely possible to pick up a turd by the clean end."
"A doctrine fostered by a delusional, illogical, liberal minority, and
rabidly promoted by an unscrupulous mainstream media, which holds forth the
proposition that it is entirely possible to pick up a turd by the clean end."