Revelation, Chapter 2.

[Fel]

As I mentioned in another thread, I'll be buying a new laptop sometime in the next week or so.

That means that there's a chance that all chapters after this one might be in a different file extension format, it's going to depend on what writing program I settle on using.

But I WILL be writing. If all else, I'll just run Wordpad and use .rtf, then convert it once I settle on a new program.

Enjoy.

[kyli]

Thanks Fel

[valinor89]

Many thanks!!

[Fel]

I'm gonna leave the chapter up, but I'll have to replace it with another copy.

That's not the final version of the chapter. I'm not sure how it happened, but that's a pre-edited save file, with a lot of the mistakes I correct when I go through it and edit. And the final version file isn't on my flash drive.

Not sure what happened. Did I forget to save my work when I did the edits?

So, when you read it, expect a lot of silly grammatical errors, stray words, and even a couple of continuity errors.

I don't have time to re-edit the chapter today. I'll do it tomorrow and post an updated, fixed version.

Sorry guys.

[bherrm]

Thanks! Appreciated as always.

[Wolfee]

Thanks Fel!

[Taliesin]

As always the sharing of your creative efforts is greatly appreciated.

Thank you.

[WildStriker-01]

thxs

[felfan3000]

Thanks Fel!

[scooter012]

Thanks Fel!

[jahmc89]

Thanks fel made my weekend bit less stressfull seeing that you posted this

[baengi]

ty fel! let us know when you've done the swap. cheers!

[wetnomad]

Many thanks, Fel.

[NSC]

Has the corrected version been posted yet?

[Fel]

Not yet.

I haven't had the chance to edit. As I warned you guys, I'm working overnight 12 hour shifts until Sunday, so I don't have much time for much of anything but work when I do.

I probably won't have the corrected chapter posted until next week.