Retribution, Chapter 11.

[expedient]

Thanks Fel

[GotToGo]

Damn, I checked after 9:00 PM last night looking for something to read and must of missed the post by minutes! Decided to he a go to bed. Got up this morning had my coffee fix and hit the Honey-Do Jar and got to few done, but if I'd known the new chapter was up it would've been damned the Honney-Do Jar, Ha!


And Fel, I did see the dangling sentence and knew something get messed up and was going to notify you, but saw you already know, so waiting for the repost tonight, and thank you.

[Balaji1976]

Thanks fel

[zooplbr]

YES!!! Thanks Fel!

[scooter012]

Thanks Fel
just what I needed for the weekend

[GotToGo]

Fel,

How do we known when corrected chapter is posted?

Thanks in advance.

[bluemax65]

Thank you.

[Fel]

Fel,

How do we known when corrected chapter is posted?

Thanks in advance.

When I get power back, I'll have the chance to post it. I haven't had power for two days now thanks to a pretty violent thunderstorm.

The correction only adds about 80 words, so you're not missing much.

[Cougar2k2]

Thanks a ton Fel!

[Rakarath]

Many Thanks Fel !

[Mari]

Thank you Fel,
This is bone jarring and powerful

[Kacoo]

Awesome, Thanks fel.

[GotToGo]

Fel,

How do we known when corrected chapter is posted?

Thanks in advance.

When I get power back, I'll have the chance to post it. I haven't had power for two days now thanks to a pretty violent thunderstorm.

The correction only adds about 80 words, so you're not missing much.

Did you get your home power back up yet? If so, reposted dropped parts of the chapter? Also, have you heard or found you haved Zaa in two locations in one paragraph?


Great chapter by the way and I hope I don't sound like I'm complaining! Love all you do for us.

[PhilippeO]

Thanks, Fel

[mjkj]

Thank you, Fel