Conviction, Chapter 1.

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I enjoyed that. Great chapter, thanks Fel :mrgreen:
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Hi Fel

Thanks a lot, can't wait!
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Great chapter.

But now I'm REALLY feeling the need for a wiki. Or at least a glossary. Lol.

Guess I'll need to do some re-reading. Woe is me. :shock: :lol:
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Thank you, Fel :)
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Whoot!! Can't wait to read it! Thanks a ton Fel!
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Awesome Thanks Fel
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Wow, thanks Fel
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woot! reading this new chapter on halloween. one of my all time fav stories :)
thanks fel!
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Thanks Fel =D
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Thank you Fel. This little bonus is appreciated.
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Fel, thank you from the bottom of my heart.
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Enjoyed really good read Thank you very much
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Ah Fel, your timing was perfect!
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Wow :D
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One quibble that just threw me. This bit is somewhat confusing:
The choice of the name Tianne wasn't all that surprising. She was a figure from Faey mythology whose closest comparison to Terran mythology was the Angel of Death, the first child of Aris that wasn't Baaen, the first of Aris' many half-god "love children" with mortal men, who was brought into Trelle's domain to serve the Trinity.
Is it Baaen that's 'the first of Aris' many half-god "love children"', or Tianne? Assuming it's the latter, it would probably be clearer if you moved 'the first child of Aris that wasn't Baaen' to the end.
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