Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

[GBLW]

Thanks Fel -that was a pleasant way to spend a little time - just suspend disbelief and let my imagination of the scene carry me to one of your universes for a short while.

If you need to spice the story up, you can easily have Shen jump a shark.

And the buzzer sounds - Ennnnnnhhhhhhhhhhhhhh - (no please, he's doing just fine as he is ...)

[wetnomad]

Many thanks Fel.

[mjkj]

Thank you, Fel

[Cougar2k2]

This'll be interesting. Thanks for the chapter Fel!

[postal]

Most excellently done!!!!!!!!!! Can hardly wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks much,
TJ

[Hearly]

Thanks

[crxbnt]

Thanks Fe!!

We don't mind doing the spell check.

[calista241]

This is awesome. I don't think I've read a better intro chapter before, and that includes works from Robert Jordan, Brandon Sanderson, and others.

Bravo Fel. Really, really good work.

[Hillybob]

Great first chapter would love to see more of this world.

[Grommley]

Wow. Incredible introduction. Glad you decided to write this one even though the Subjugation series is my all time favorite story. Keep writing what you enjoy.

[bherrm]

Thanks! Keep those chapters coming.

[faut]

Another great chapter. Thanks Fel!

[ramouton]

Thanks Fel. Awesome as usual. I think I speak for everyone when I say we highly appreciate your efforts.

[Mari]

Oh my word Fell thanks for this. I have been reading your work since 2006 and I can honestly say you are like a fine wine you just get better with age. First chapter is looking good it is a good base to start off. Just have fun writing it!

[tummi]

Thanks Fel. Great start!!