chapter 10 of Subjugation done

Thermopyle
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Re: chapter 10 of Subjugation done

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edengrave wrote: I hated is attitude at the start, there was a lot of hypocrisy there. Imagine amerindians hating all americans/caucassians because of what was done to them, instead of judging individuals through their actions. ridiculous.
It's actually much worse than that, because while Americans have treated American Indians very poorly, killing most of them off and taking their land, and American Indians are still being persecuted by our government, the Imperium in this story has treated everybody quite fairly, and the only times humans have been shown to be abused is when the Imperium's laws were broken.  American Indians can justifiably blame Americans for what has been done to them, because our government supported, and supports, what was done.  In the story, the only thing humans in general can really object to (outside of Imperium laws being broken) is that the Imperium is enforcing a socialist government, one that, for humans, lacks the flaws that real socialist governments have or had.
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Re: chapter 10 of Subjugation done

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Good chapter. Bad physics. Bad, bad physics. Fel, maybe you should stick to only explaining results of Jason's inventions, ane leave means (the way it is done) with only sketch?

But if you write it without research, it is understendable, if sometimes makes story laudable and irritating slightly for me. Physics wasn't your major, nor minor, Fel?
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