It's what you were waiting for.

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Fel

  ........ I don't think i am going to use a nail cutter till the next installment .....  ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC ..
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Re: It's what you were waiting for.

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fel wrote:I'm done with 7.

It's not as long as the usual chapter, because 8's going to be fairly long, and I didn't want to break up what's coming across 2 chapters and torment anyone.

I sent it to Greymist...he was the only one on IRC to accept the DCC. When he wakes up and realizes he has it, he'll post a link so people can get to it.

Odds are, he's out seeing Return of the King right now. ;)

I'll start on chapter 8 as soon as I finish writing this post.

I'm sorry to make yuo all wait so long, but unfortunately, school had to come first.

May this be my peace offering.


Love it i was so capture by the story that i almost forgot to pack my things and ride my bicyckle the 5 Km to work.
I goot their 2 minuts late. Luckly the Boss was late as   8)

Its relly hard work cyckling trou all that snow but the story you wrote keept me happy smiling even when the snow where falling and the air was cold. Thank you...
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Re: It's what you were waiting for.

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Since no one else said anything about it, I guess I will. After Tarrin wakes from making Mist fireproof, you have FireFlash sleeping on his shoulders, but a couple lines later, FireFlash comes streaking out of the tent.

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Like everyone else, I want another chapter. So hurry up with Subjegation. ;D
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Already fixed.  I caught it like 5 minutes after releasing the chapter.  ;)
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found a mistake:

when tarrin made mist's belt in axe he made it to do 4 things:

1. have mist's human illusion
2. have the invisibilty illusion
3. walk on water/snow
4. make her fireproof and mask all the magic
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Re: It's what you were waiting for.

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Mistake? If you're refering to the fire restistance remember shes taken her belt off so she doesn't get the restistance anymore :)
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my bad reread sword an saw that :o
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