Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 7

[GBLW]

Well, I had my working holiday and I had a great time - got home in time to see the weather change.
Anyway, here's Chapter 7 of 'Detour to Otherwhen' and a pile of editing on the prior chapters, most not too noticeable.
If anyone notices glaring typos or other errors, please send me a PM.
Let's keep the nit-picking it off the board, okay? I just might argue about the change you want to see me make.

K Pelle
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[zedd]

Thank you. Nice chapter.

[dellstart]

Thank you. Nice chapter.

dittod the above . good stuff

BTW Just as a sidebar , when i read the first chapter ( a while ago) and you mentioned Victoria , my heart almost skipped a beat. "Wow i thought another story about Australia , how good is that !" Yet in the next line or so my hopes where dashed knowing no Saskatchewan River,or cree nation were to be found in the lucky country. To be honest ,I wasn't even aware that there was another "Victoria" outside Australia. so u learn something new every day.

[crxbnt]

Thanks Mr. Pelle. This is an intriguing tale that has completely sucked me in!

crxbnt