I didn't think I should leave my readers hanging on that cliff for too long. So here's another chapter. (There''s a smaller cliff on this one.)
GBLW / kp
Thor's Child - Chapter 3
Moderator: Contributing Authors
Thor's Child - Chapter 3
K Pelle aka GBLW
My recent stories are available at: http://www.grynenbayritpublications.com/
My recent stories are available at: http://www.grynenbayritpublications.com/
-
andy_t_roo
- Sorcerer
- Posts: 69
- Joined: Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:37 pm
Re: Thor's Child - Chapter 3
16 downloads already? -- anyone would think people are hanging out for new chapters of whatever great piece of writing is updated next 
I don't mind interesting events about to happen at the end of a chapter, as long as i don't have to wait 2 years for the next chapter (unlike some writers who seem to think that its a great way to boost next book sales ...)
(and first
, i think its the first time i can say this )
I don't mind interesting events about to happen at the end of a chapter, as long as i don't have to wait 2 years for the next chapter
(unlike some writers who seem to think that its a great way to boost next book sales ...)(and first
, i think its the first time i can say this )
Re: Thor's Child - Chapter 3
I am really enjoying this, but you don't have to include the whole story
in the zip for each chapter . Other than that a very good read, and enjoyable.
UrsaMajor
in the zip for each chapter
. Other than that a very good read, and enjoyable.UrsaMajor
UrsaMajor
"To Absent Friends"
'The West is were we belong, The Wolves and I,
And my old friends now dead,
May we meet again on the other side.' Blue Horse, Lakota Warrior
"To Absent Friends"
'The West is were we belong, The Wolves and I,
And my old friends now dead,
May we meet again on the other side.' Blue Horse, Lakota Warrior
Re: Thor's Child - Chapter 3
great m8
thanks
ham
thanks
ham
Re: Thor's Child - Chapter 3
LOLUrsaMajor wrote:I am really enjoying this, but you don't have to include the whole story
in the zip for each chapter
UrsaMajor
K Pelle aka GBLW
My recent stories are available at: http://www.grynenbayritpublications.com/
My recent stories are available at: http://www.grynenbayritpublications.com/
-
DigitalMaestro
- Sui'Kun
- Posts: 268
- Joined: Tue Jan 29, 2008 5:01 pm
- Contact:
Re: Thor's Child - Chapter 3
Well, that was exciting!
-DigitalMaestro
-DigitalMaestro
-
DigitalMaestro
- Sui'Kun
- Posts: 268
- Joined: Tue Jan 29, 2008 5:01 pm
- Contact:
Re: Thor's Child - Chapter 3
Someone will probably win a bet as I ask this, but when will he start hurling lightning bolts or wielding Mjöllnir?
Sorry, have to ask. Tor? Thor? C'mon, you had to expect it....
-DigitalMaestro
Sorry, have to ask. Tor? Thor? C'mon, you had to expect it....
-DigitalMaestro
Re: Thor's Child - Chapter 3
Sorry, neither lightning bolts nor Mjöllnir are in the plot line and although his birth certificate reads T-H-O-R, it was written out by a hospital administrator who was English. He's a Swede. His name is pronounced Tor.
K Pelle aka GBLW
My recent stories are available at: http://www.grynenbayritpublications.com/
My recent stories are available at: http://www.grynenbayritpublications.com/
Re: Thor's Child - Chapter 3
Nice pace
Re: Thor's Child - Chapter 3
Very nice chapter 
Thank you
Thank you
Re: Thor's Child - Chapter 3
I admit that I like having all the previous chapters and being able to click on them to keep the story in perspective.
"Bachelors should be heavily taxed. It is not fair that some men should be happier than others." - Oscar Wilde
What actually happened was that George Dubya Bush saw an Iraqi maths teacher carrying a geometry set, accused him of being a member of the notorious Al-gebra movement, and charged him with possessing weapons of maths instruction.
What actually happened was that George Dubya Bush saw an Iraqi maths teacher carrying a geometry set, accused him of being a member of the notorious Al-gebra movement, and charged him with possessing weapons of maths instruction.
Re: Thor's Child - Chapter 3
That was an extremely good read! A great way to relax for my lunch and get away from the problems at my desk. Thanks for sharing that with us. Please continue.
crxbnt
crxbnt
Re: Thor's Child - Chapter 3
Pretty good.