Unification, chapter 6.

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Unification, chapter 6.

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This "short story" has already gone longer than I thought it would, and I'm not sure how much longer it will go.

But, for what it's worth, enjoy.
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whoot first
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wow 2nd for the first time. thanks fel keep up the good work!
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hope this finds you and yours doing well.

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Holy cow! Just thought I'd check before heading to bed, and suprise!

Thanks Fel, guess I am staying up for a while yet!

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Thanks Fel,
Went to vote, NZ elections today, get back to this great surprise. Thank you :D
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YES! :D

THANK YOU FEL! 8)
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Good deal - something fun to look at besides assorted acft going bump in the night.
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Darn wish I would have been paying attention... I could have read this tonight instead of having to wait till tomorrow. Anyway much appreciated Fel.
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Thank you!
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7th in line, i hope
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What an outstanding chapter!!!! Please take your time and don't rush this one through, as you have laid the groundwork for something epic. The characters have been developed, but you are deepening and enriching their personalities. You now have a couple of subplots that will come back around later and you have created what I consider a totally unique plot/story line that could/should ultimately end with a Generation on the throne. Not because of her being part of a 'Master Race' but because she's been prepared by both parents to be the best thing for her people, for ALL the people.
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Ahhhh..... finally here is 6 :D
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woohoo great charter :D :D :D
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