Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
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b4fugitive
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Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
Thanks Fiferguy. Do you know how I can get chapters 1 and 2?
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Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
Chapter 1 is here: http://forums.sennadar.com/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=1028
Chapter 2 is here: http://forums.sennadar.com/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=1033
Chapter 2 is here: http://forums.sennadar.com/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=1033
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b4fugitive
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Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
Naming suggestion how about "KITCAT" wait to close to trade mark Infringement or maybe KIT for CAt? 
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SHALIK_TEX
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Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
Or perhaps " The Lone Vulpan " ..Just throwin somthin out there...
The road through life
is long and rock.
Take Plenty of Beer...
When Life throws you Limes
Break out the Salt & Tequila
And have a Party.....
is long and rock.
Take Plenty of Beer...
When Life throws you Limes
Break out the Salt & Tequila
And have a Party.....
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IdiotPaste
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Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
Maybe you could use a working title until you can find a more permanent one.
Might I suggest:
1. "Dammit, where's the rest of my ear?"
2. "Femmes are bad for your back" or...
3. "Pretty Kitty Little Bitty Woo-Woo"
I know...Pure Genius. You can thank me later.
Great chapter once again Fel. Looking forward to lucky number 7.
Might I suggest:
1. "Dammit, where's the rest of my ear?"
2. "Femmes are bad for your back" or...
3. "Pretty Kitty Little Bitty Woo-Woo"
I know...Pure Genius. You can thank me later.
Great chapter once again Fel. Looking forward to lucky number 7.
"Any man who can hitch the length and breadth of the galaxy, rough it, slum it, struggle against terrible odds, win through, and still knows where his towel is is clearly a man to be reckoned with."
Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
"Family Matters"
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Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
It doesn't have to be all that hard ...the point is they will do damage maybe not as much as other places but Still a Hole is a Hole.darkhand wrote:unfortunately I don't think that Jasons marbles would work real well in this world, not enough hard surfaces to bounce off of.Phantom wrote: Pulls out Jasons Bag of Tricks ....Loads up the Hello Kittys the My little ponys and the little
talked about Bratz.
Then decides to Toss in a Crate of Marbles too boot
Starts filling out the Shipping Form ...Send To: James Galloway ..humm
Phantom
No the point is After all this Time ....living with the addiction and going through withdrawls for sometimes monthsFiferguy wrote:I don't think it warrants a personal visit yet... if it did, I think my readers would've already been camping at my door...Phantom wrote:Who says we aren't ?
Blackberrys and Mobile Phones are wonderful things at times
Phantom
And We Find out he CAN write this fast .....errrrrrrrrrr.
Phantom
And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
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Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
Either that or he's been stockpiling stuff on us... He's probably just had this stuff sitting around for months.Phantom wrote: No the point is After all this Time ....living with the addiction and going through withdrawls for sometimes months
And We Find out he CAN write this fast .....errrrrrrrrrr.
Phantom
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Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
I don't know Either Way he's been a BAD Cat ....aw..err Boy.Fiferguy wrote:Either that or he's been stockpiling stuff on us... He's probably just had this stuff sitting around for months.Phantom wrote: No the point is After all this Time ....living with the addiction and going through withdrawls for sometimes months
And We Find out he CAN write this fast .....errrrrrrrrrr.
Phantom
At the least I think Removal of all EQ related Items from his Residence could be warranted
We'll Wait and see how long it takes for the next chapter to come out
Phantom
And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
Dude, I play EQ twice a week...Friday and Saturday raids. That's it. ;P
It wasn't stockpiled. I CAN write quickly when I want to and I'm ready...though I was about a half a chapter to a chapter ahead on the new story. I was making sure I wasn't going to make any changes before releasing it, which is ALSO new for me.
Think you don't remember the Demon's Bane rush, or the quick succession of Subjugation from 18 to 20. And I also banged out Insurrection in like record time.
I've just been more motivated than usual to write, even at the expense of sleep.
It wasn't stockpiled. I CAN write quickly when I want to and I'm ready...though I was about a half a chapter to a chapter ahead on the new story. I was making sure I wasn't going to make any changes before releasing it, which is ALSO new for me.
Think you don't remember the Demon's Bane rush, or the quick succession of Subjugation from 18 to 20. And I also banged out Insurrection in like record time.
I've just been more motivated than usual to write, even at the expense of sleep.
Just another guy from the shallow end of the gene pool.
Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
Aren't you supposed to be writing or doing school work? saw your name in this directory and was going, whoot chap 7 he had time....Fel wrote:Dude, I play EQ twice a week...Friday and Saturday raids. That's it. ;P
It wasn't stockpiled. I CAN write quickly when I want to and I'm ready...though I was about a half a chapter to a chapter ahead on the new story. I was making sure I wasn't going to make any changes before releasing it, which is ALSO new for me.
Think you don't remember the Demon's Bane rush, or the quick succession of Subjugation from 18 to 20. And I also banged out Insurrection in like record time.
I've just been more motivated than usual to write, even at the expense of sleep.
Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
My god I pull a couple of double shift at work and you throw chapters out like the canidates drop out of the running...now if we really want to be mean just call out the Tele tubbies and send them at Fel. 
Awsome writting and very good progression in how the characters work thru out the story so far; and I believe you can stop being worried about furry being a weak point in portfolio as this is turning out to be solid work. I would not say on par with previous stories but definitly not anything to be at all ashamed of.
Awsome writting and very good progression in how the characters work thru out the story so far; and I believe you can stop being worried about furry being a weak point in portfolio as this is turning out to be solid work. I would not say on par with previous stories but definitly not anything to be at all ashamed of.
Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
Well, I for one am quite glad that you are able to write both quickly and well. I'm impressed by this story, from many angles including seeing how your writing style has evolved over the years.
As for story title - I like the "through his eyes" thought - take the magazine article series and apply it to the whole story.
Is anyone out there interested in seeing what the comics would actually look like? I'm worse at drawing than I am breathing in a vacuum (except for technical stuff), so don't look to me for that
Again - Great work Fel - looking forward to the next installment.
-Miraborn
As for story title - I like the "through his eyes" thought - take the magazine article series and apply it to the whole story.
Is anyone out there interested in seeing what the comics would actually look like? I'm worse at drawing than I am breathing in a vacuum (except for technical stuff), so don't look to me for that
Again - Great work Fel - looking forward to the next installment.
-Miraborn
Re: Don't get used to this. Chapter 6.
So who kiddies shot JR???????