Short Story: Insurrection, Chapter 1.

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Short Story: Insurrection, Chapter 1.

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This isn't where I wanted to stop it, but it's good enough for now.

The reasoning is rather simple: I promised you guys I'd work on it, but unfortunately, I couldn't do any work on it at all in Maine. My sister only has a laptop, and she uses it for work. I never really had a chance during my quiet time without her children there, because that was her quiet time too, and she was using it.

So, this is what I managed to get done before I left. It's at a reasonable enough stopping point that there won't be any of those evil cliffhangers you guys hate so much.

But I'll have to put an extra-evil cliffhanger in here somewhere, just so you guys don't think I'm getting soft.
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Whoot, First :P

Hope you had a nice Christmas Fel.
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nice!!!

Work can wait I am reading this NOW!!
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fear1222 wrote:nice!!!

Work can wait I am reading this NOW!!
I did too fear, heh I'm at work too..
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thanks Fel
have a nice time my friend
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I'm a lurker. I have read all of them and greatly enjoy reading them. I'm happy to see my two favorite stories continue.
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Read it. Liked it. Want more... :D
Thanks it's great as always, have fun in Maine with the family. :)
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sweet!!! new sub :mrgreen:
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Weee.... I got my Christmas present from Fel. Thanks Fel... Merry Christmas and a Happy new Year... :D
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Should this not be better posted in Announcements where everyone will see it, rather than hidden amongst the Posts?
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fear1222 wrote:nice!!!

Work can wait I am reading this NOW!!
Not me! After a 33 hour flight home, I am on vacation at Disneyland.
Nothing like a nice relaxing chapter (of FEL) after a full day of dancing mice and screaming dolls.
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Oh so nice of you Fel!! Weekend reading!!!! Well... only if I hadn't read it already. Great chapter!!. Have a Happy New Year all.

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wonderful. Asante bwana ( swahili for thank you sir)
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Can't wait for more, especially since I have an idea on what the Trillanes have as an ace in the hole to use against Jason :)
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Hot Damn I love it....


I was just thinking the other day .......it just wasn't going to feel like Christmas after all these years with out
Having a new chapter of Subugation.


So having a new Story set in the Subugation universe is a Fansastic Gift ......Thanks Fel





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And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
The CruxShadows "Winterborn" (This Sacrifice)
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