Edits: chapter 4-8

[Fel]

I'm pretty sure I got everything in these chapters. I did do my best to read through them, and I fixed the errors that have already been brought to my attention.

As far as Legacy goes, I took an axe to it, and I cut out about 6 pages, so I'm kinda starting over from page 3.

Not deleted though. The scene I cut I saved, for I felt it was better suited for a later chapter.

My first week of school was pretty nice. I like my professors and though I have a lot of homework, so far it's been INTERESTING homework. I like my classes this semester, and I think it's gonna be a good term.

[Fawks]

Fel,

*** caveat I have not read the newly reposted chapters yet. ***
I don't know if it was mentioned earlier, but...

I noticed that when Tarrin's parent's moved to Suld, they said that their farm had been completely burned to the ground by a goblin raid on Aldreth. Then, in Weavespinner, Jesmind is living there after only patching a few things.

[gesit]

great now i have something to read ... lol
thanks

ham

[Downdude]

Thanks for the edits.

[Mizriath]

Thanks Fel. I thought the original had been perfect reading. Well you have to try to make things more perfect. I have to put in effort to read a more perfect effort.