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Btw any1 got a copy of Indomitus Oriens - Books 3 in The Fovean Chronicles by Robert W. Brady ???

thanx for help

Yeah - I do. Go to http://www.swordsandsorcery.com and send me an address and I'll send you one

Thanks - you've really spent some time reading me and I appreciate it

There's two things I'm worried about right now - does the beginning drag, and have I left enough room at the end for a proper conclusion?

I don't want to write a spoiler, but at the end you can see why they had to die. I'm ...

OK, guys - book two, Indomitus Oriens, is DONE.

Well, the rough is. As well you know, there's still the pass back and then the rewrite, then enough editing to choke a walrus.

But the words are all there, and you can see how it ends.

As long as I get comments, it will stay up. If not, well - I ...

What do you guys think of the new site?

http://www.intwiz.com

OK - updates are done up to chapter 42. If you've been following the story, I'd REALLY like some opinions on the new direction over the old from Chap 39 on.

I have just recently found you story. I have just finished reading the first three chapters of book 1 and would like to read the rest before getting into book 2. If there is any way I could do this I would love to read it. So far I would like to say I enjoy your writing. You set a good introduction ...

Wanted to give you guys an update - especially the loyal followers

I'm rewriting the ending, which is why the updates have been slow. I also did a lot of editing of previous chapters, mostly for spelling.

I think that the Bill character is going to need a rewrite for the middle part - he's a ...

Mysterious wrote:The link to Chapter 43: Perceptions goes to Chapter 42: Combat, in all its forms.

Yep - you're right

It's fixed now

Hi, Doc,

To straighten out some confusion on Book One:

1. War is a god from a different dimension
2. Anubis only exists due to a human fascination with death, and at a fraction of his power. He's kind of a leftover of Egyptian religion.
3. If you're sympathizing with the anti-hero, you're right ...

Sent you a link

If you give me a detailed critique of Book Two, I'll send you an autographed copy of Book One

Ok, first of all, thanks to all of those who read and who sent some feedback

Second, book two has about six chapters left in it, meaning that I'll soon be done with the first pass, then will go back to thread in the sub plots, then go for the third pass for continuity

This is when I REALLY need ...

Man, I miss Singapore. I haven't been there in AGES.

Have a Tiger beer for me! I'll make sure you get a book, don't worry.

A man after my own heart. Yes, we ARE going to see more information about how he's brought technology to magic.

One thing that we'll see are 'skrits,' which is Lupus' answer to a checking system.

That will all come in the second pass, one the book is laid out and I do a major rewrite, defining ...

Guys, don't worry about book one - it's already to print

Book Two, Indomitus Oriens, is the book to review.

Yes, he did, and no, I don't think that this ruins the book for anyone

Books 3/4 will be more about children of people whom you're getting to know now, although they pop their heads up in book 2

I didn't leave him as a dangling thread, tho