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My condolences on the passing of your mother.

Thank you for putting in the effort and continuing this story for us.

A suggestion about other backgrounds. Farm land, the volcano idea, . Or a background of some buildings, with the "jungle" setting on one of the islands in the Hawaiian chain? This is kind of what I am talking about.
https://www.bing.com/images/search?view=detailV2&ccid=8WF8f9IE&id ...

Thank you Fel

I have been thinking of something similar. There is too much white space on that cover. I wanted to put in some islands in the background and make the pics of the dragons a bit smaller.

You comment about a volcano, is the perfect thing to add to this. I'll have to see if I can find the right kind ...

So I have read all the chapters, available so far, and, just for me, I have edited them. The American English really jars when I'm reading the story.
I then merged all chapters into one (on-going) book, then converted the saved document as a mobi file, so that I could read it on my tablet, Samsung ...

This is great. I will start to read from the very beginning, again. We aren't in lock down here, Antigua in the Caribbean, but business is slowing down so there is lots of free time.

Thanks for this Fell. Stay safe. (That includes everyone who is a fan of Fel's stories).

Thank you very much Fel.

You deserve a a long restful sleep (or whatever.. in bed).

Make sure you are well rested so you can get a good start to the next chapter, that we are all looking forward to.

Merry Christmas and a happy new year.

Thank you for this Christmas present.

I have to, generally, agree with everyone here, so far. I believe that Fel deserves to get some compensation for all the great stories and writing he has produced.

I, with a bunch of others fans/avid readers, managed to needle I mean convince, yes convince, another great writer (Geoff Wolak), to ...

Thank you.

Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.


Thank you.


Sorry, just to be clear. This story fits in ...

Chasm wrote: Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.

Thank you.

Is this part of the Subjugation "universe" or a separate/different story?

Thank you very much.

Fel wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2019 12:21 pm I can't remember if I spellchecked it or not. So if you see any typos, that means I forgot.

Enjoy.

Thank you very much for this.

Don't worry about spellchecking or typos. I usually go through them first looking for stuff like that. I make the corrections then read them.